i really liked this article alot. i knew of gambling on pool games, but i never knew the extent of the trade. after reading that article it makes me want a real sweet nickname too.
If you intend to go into journalism as a career, you should be writing, taking pictures, laying out pages, making decisions and informing our community now. Really.
Contact an editor at the Temple News and begin working for them ASAP. Get clips. Get experience. Get paid.
Former CBS3 anchor Larry Mendte visited our class in 2008 and then put us on the news. He polled the class on the day of the Pennsylvania Primary Election. You can see the video by clicking here.
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"Kid Delicious follows the motion of the stick, his arms reaching forward like Superman flying over Gotham City."
Wasn't it Batman in Gotham City?
Oh nuts. I guess it should have been Metropolis. Damn you comic book geeks!
- George (the teacher who apparently messed up)
Looks like you do have some fun writing these stories. Do you pick your topics, or do they tell you what to write about?
I'm not 100% sure, but I don't think this sentence's grammar is correct.
And at a third a young couple fondle each other between shots.
Shouldn't it be fondles? And if so, can I take your editor's job? I'm sure it pays more than mine.
Just so you know, I'm not trying to be a smart ass pointing that out. I'm just curious if that's correct.
Kim Wood
Let me fix that, becuase my puntuation is wrong, and I am commenting about editing.
I'm not 100% sure, but I don't think the following sentence's grammar is correct:
"And at a third a young couple fondle each other between shots."
Shouldn't it be fondles? And if so, can I take your editor's job? I'm sure it pays more than mine.
Just so you know, I'm not trying to be a smart ass pointing that out. I'm just curious if that's correct.
Kim Wood
Now everyone is trying to correct me?
I'm pretty sure it's correct as it is. Couple is singular but they, which is implied, is plural. Since it is plural, there is no s.
Am I wrong?
- George (the teacher)
good work george
-todd
Hmm, good point. Grammar is so confusing sometimes. That's really going to bug me now : )
Kim
I really like this article. I usually don't like long-format but I really like the structure of this and how the characters are built.
i really liked this article alot. i knew of gambling on pool games, but i never knew the extent of the trade. after reading that article it makes me want a real sweet nickname too.
-cjh3
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